Comments on: Hawaii http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/ Sun, 23 Nov 2008 09:12:28 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.5 By: shelby http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/#comment-8 shelby Mon, 08 Jan 2007 21:50:28 +0000 http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/#comment-8 Good job, nice details, and i like the way you used all those adj. 's . -shelby Good job, nice details, and i like the way you used all those adj. ’s .

-shelby

]]> By: jaime http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/#comment-7 jaime Mon, 08 Jan 2007 00:42:27 +0000 http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/#comment-7 I like how you used alot of adjetives. I like how you used alot of adjetives.

]]> By: marial6e http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/#comment-5 marial6e Sun, 24 Dec 2006 15:40:26 +0000 http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/#comment-5 HI! i loved your pharagrag! it had lots of detail. And you picked a nice place. HAWAII! i ben there. my brother is in the navy. he is based in hawaii. he goes underwater with sumberines. i also ben in the sumberines. they are really compacked. everything is small. and you would think they just sit in the water but they really do stuff. they bomb the bad bad bad people. also when i went to hawaii we went swimming with dolphins. have you ever done that? it is so much fun. we evan got to kiss the dolphins. they felt very smoothe! i hope you get to go to hawaii. but the plan ride is very very long! 13 hours! but its worth it! maria HI! i loved your pharagrag! it had lots of detail. And you picked a nice place. HAWAII! i ben there. my brother is in the navy. he is based in hawaii. he goes underwater with sumberines. i also ben in the sumberines. they are really compacked. everything is small. and you would think they just sit in the water but they really do stuff. they bomb the bad bad bad people. also when i went to hawaii we went swimming with dolphins. have you ever done that? it is so much fun. we evan got to kiss the dolphins. they felt very smoothe! i hope you get to go to hawaii. but the plan ride is very very long! 13 hours! but its worth it!

maria

]]> By: Jessica (bff) http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/#comment-4 Jessica (bff) Thu, 21 Dec 2006 00:10:15 +0000 http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/#comment-4 Taylor, it could use some work...but I like it. I like the intence detail. Taylor, it could use some work…but I like it. I like the intence detail.

]]> By: Cheryl6l http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/#comment-3 Cheryl6l Tue, 19 Dec 2006 03:13:42 +0000 http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/#comment-3 this is a great paragraph. And by the way, Happy b-day on Dec. 27! =) -Cheryl this is a great paragraph. And by the way, Happy b-day on Dec. 27! =)
-Cheryl

]]> By: emilyp6e http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/#comment-2 emilyp6e Tue, 19 Dec 2006 00:43:48 +0000 http://taylorg6e.learnerblogs.org/2006/12/18/hawaii/#comment-2 I really enjoyed how you used so much expresion and the pictures you used were great I really enjoyed it!!!!!!! -Emily p I really enjoyed how you used so much expresion and the pictures you used were great I really enjoyed it!!!!!!!

-Emily p

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